Hello beauties, i'll just start directly about the feedbacks:( pageviews can reach 100 with a max of 4 comments? and no ask.fm feedbacks at all.. i really hope u share what you think wether it's positive or negative.
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sleeping in car rides.
fahad: nayfaa, yallah 7beebti w9lnaa -as he shaked my arm gently-
nayfa: i opened my eyes to find us right infront.....
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fahad: yallah galbii 3ashan ma nt2a5ar 3al,maw3id!
nayfa: fahad mww3d esh?
fahad: 6'ay3a intee inzlee yallah
-as he stretched his arms to help me get down of the car-
we crossed the uneven streets.
fahad: intbhii laa t6e7een
nayfa: ashwaa inee mub labsa heels
fahad: btlbseen don't worry w i'll have to hold your hands for the rest of the day.
nayfa: hmm..
fahad: here we are!
i didn't get where we were heading to and why.. just the fact that i'm with him makes me feel safe.
It was a huge basement filled with all kinds of backgrounds, themes, and outfits.
fahad: shufii gabel ma nd5l, i want to be with you forever cause you mean the world to me.. ma a7taj wlaa ashuf ilaa entii.. w wdee e4a mr elwgt nstrj3 our memories l2nha elwa7eeda ilee btbga faa 7set inaa nkml elyoum kellaa photoshooting..
nayfa: this is way too cute, yazenk fahad!!!
fahad: lww bydii jbtk kl yom 3ashan asm3 klmt yazeenk
nayfa: -blushes-
fahad: -side hug-
yallah emshii
it was still early, they offered a huge bag and we started choosing and packing themes so that we could stop and tour around for the perfect pictures.
Jim: are you ready guys?
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the day was perfect, it really was.
we roamed over the perfect places with different outfits.
fahad: gulii ameen
nayfa: ameen
fahad: njii m3 yasmeen w sama
nayfa: -it made me smile-
3ad t9dgg..
fahad: e7kii
nayfa: 3umrii ma t5ylt nfsii mt3lga ba7d lhl,drjaa bss 5ayfa..
fahad: bsmella 3lek wsh m5wfk?
nayfa: fahad mn 3rftk w ana kl youm a5af inaa yjii youm w maa algak..
y3nii wsh bswii wgtaha 9dg fahad tra muu drama wallah!
enshallah yomii gbl yomk.
fahad: mabeek t3edeen 4al,kalam.. nayfa ilee allah katba by9eer
-i rested my head on his chest as we waited for our next stop-
it was such a tiring day, but i couldn't ask for more. it was magical.
we headed to the apartment after eating somewhere nearby..
fahad: how was it?
nayfa: a7laa youum 9dg thank you!!
fahad: a hug?
nayfa: nope
fahad: 3ad 4eel marra mub 3la kefek
-as he hugged me-
nayfa: fheed -chuckles-
Dad: ahlaan b7baaybii
fahad: e7mm
grwwwwsha.
nayfa: ahlan baba
Dad: allah y5leekum lb36', fahad abeek bmw9'oo3!
nayfa: i looked back, muu mn 3adat baba y7akii fahad
Dad: laa t5afeen mw9'oo3 7luu
nayfa: umm ana
Dad: ee ya bntii entii, ed5lii bs allah y9l7k
A W K W A R D...
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felwa and fahdah's eyes will soon leave its place.
nayfa: bsmellaa 3la 3yunkmm laa y6g fekum 3rg bss.
fahdah: halaaa ubooy, ween elli tarkna yomen
i rested on the fluffy couch, gosh i was dead tired.
felwa: shftii blbdaya m39ba w a5r shy trj3 elnfsya 10.
fahdah: m33 fahad y3nii akeed..
nayfa: bdeena? bdeena haa.. ee 6b3n ystlmoon elwa7d a3u4 bellaah.
6b3n rk6't felwa w el6e7at..
felwa: ella guleeli wsh sweetuu
fahdah: -jumps over me-
nayfa: yaweelii mn zod eln7f y3nii
w i told them what happened today..
felwa: wa7d zy fahad lwsm7t.
nayfa: ilaa fahad, he's mine.
fahdah: yanaaaaas elli y3'ar.
nayfa: elzbdaa.. let's skype with dana!
felwa: 7akenaha elyoum 7osaa w preparations w ke4a
nayfa: ajal wsh raykum bukra we shop for her wedding dresses
felwa: perfecto, w ana abee heels jdeed
fahdah: jebuuli m3kum please
nayfa: muub pizza jeebulii w ma jeebuli, dress ya mama btjeen w tgiseen b3d, ajal let's wake up early 3ashan nf6r.
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i took a hot shower, changed into my sweatpants and found 12 missed calls from fahad
i called him back but didn't answer.. he's surely asleep.
WHATSAPP:
hey sunshine!
u didn't answer so i decided to text u saying that i need to meet you urgently tomorrow!
don't worry.. love you<3
this was way too short, i know.
i decided to make it up to you guys in my break time.

The reason you don't get lots of comments is that your story is getting really boring! You give some details which are totally not important!!!! And come on 53 chapters and the story didn't come to an end yet!!! That's too too long and the longer you make it, the more bored it becom,, I was one of your readers and it was an amazing story!! But not anymore! It's too long and please y3ni had some reality! Mu m3gola abo nayfa yshofha t5m fahad wma ygol shy! Y3ni mshena lk enha 24 hours m3ah bs y3ni relax aboha byshofhm w it's okay 3nda w they are not real married yet! 7ta lw mutfat7en they're still muslims at least! W I was a bit harsh bs sam7eni your story started driving me mad w I don't think ra7 akml agra
ReplyDeleteIttss amazing and i like it longer and i dont want to end real soon i want you to complete it after they get married and with details , w la its not boring
ReplyDeleteYalaa where's the next chapter ;( I really love your story and all but I agree with the first comment about how it's getting a bit long
ReplyDeleteThere's a problem in your blog is that you take WAYY too long to post that makes me forget the events !!
ReplyDeleteIts not getting long or boring but u take to long to post the chapters , and we support u all the way and dont en it soon but try to post more offten like every 3 days or 4
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